Kia ora and welcome back to my blog,
For the past week we have been writing our own plays and base it on a original fairytale. I chose Goldilocks and the three bears, but I changed the title to The curse of Goldifur. But in our play on our fairytale we had to add a plot twist to my writing. My plot twist is Goldilocks was orginally a bear and a witch cursed her to be human and the curse lasts 5 days and if the animals that have been cursed don’t find their families or relatives in 5 days they stay a human forever.
Here is my play I hope you enjoy:
The curse of Goldifur.
Characters:
- Goldilocks/Goldifur
- Papa Bear
- Mama Bear
- Baby Bear
- Queen Trixie
- Lady
(At Trixie’s castle)
Queen Trixie: Mwahahahaha! Now I’ve got you for good!
Goldifur: !ROAR!
(The Queen turns Goldifur into a human)
(Gates open)
Goldilocks: (Saying scaredly) What’s happened to me? A cute button nose? Big wavy locks? Big round buttocks? I’m, I’m a human!
(Goldilocks runs into this town full of people that she doesn’t know)
(People murmuring)
Lady: Little girl, are you ok, you look worried?
Goldilocks: I don’t know what to do. I just ran 2km from this awful witch who transformed me into a human.
(Goldilocks answered calmly)
Lady: Ok? (she hesitated) You can stay with me for a few nights in my little cottage and you can tell me all about it.
(They walk to the lady’s cottage)
Goldilocks: Well it all started when I was running away from the Queen…
(Goldilocks tells the lady the whole story)
Lady: WOW! That’s one heck of a story.
Goldilocks: Yeah I know. Thank you for letting me stay for a few nights in your cottage, I really appreciate it.
Lady: You’re very welcome.
(2 days went past)
Goldilocks: Thank you again for letting me stay with you.
(Goldilocks starts walking back into the woods)
(Three dreadful hours went by)
Goldilocks: I’m starving! Oooo there’s a cottage over there I might have a wee sneak around, to see if there is any food.
(Goldilocks running towards the cottage)
Goldilocks: The door is open. (she said surprisingly)
(Goldilocks tiptoed in to see if anyone was in there?)
Goldilocks: Hello? Hello, anyone home?
(Goldilocks eyes went straight for the porridge)
Goldilocks: Mmmm yum, I love porridge, I hope these people wouldn’t mind if I have a taste of their scrumptious porridge.
(Goldilocks sat down by the big bowl)
Goldilocks: !OUCH! This porridge is too hot.
(Goldilocks moved on to the next bowl of porridge
Goldilocks: Ugh this porridge is too cold.
(Goldilocks shuffled over to the last bowl of porridge)
Goldilocks: Mmmmm delicious this bowl of porridge is just right.
(Goldilocks gobbled all the bowl of porridge, and decided that she wanted to sit down)
Goldilocks: OW! This chair is too hard.
(Goldilocks moved on to the next chair)
Goldilocks: WOAH! This chair is too soft.
(Goldilocks moved on to the last chair)
Goldilocks: Ahhh this chair is just right.
!Snap! (The chair breaks)
(Goldilocks sat down for a bit then started getting tired)
Goldilocks: I’m so tired, I need to take a nap.
(Goldilocks goes upstairs to seek out the beds
Goldilocks: JEEZ! This bed is way too hard.
(Goldilocks hop on to the other bed)
Goldilocks: Holy Moly! This bed is too soft.
(Goldilocks popped onto the next bed)
Goldilocks: Ahhh this is just right.
(Goldilocks slowly drifted off to sleep)
1 hour later…
Baby bear: I can’t wait for my porridge.
(Baby bear said excitedly. They arrived at their cottage.)
Mama Bear: Huh that’s weird why is our door wide open?
(Mama Bear said unconvinced. They stepped into their house)
Papa Bear: Grrrr! someone’s taken a bit of my porridge.
Mama Bear: Oh no! Someone’s taken a bite of my porridge.
Baby Bear: Awww! Someone’s eaten my porridge and it’s all gone!
(Baby bear started to cry)
Baby Bear: Waaahhh!
(Baby bear stops. The three bears walk into the lounge)
Papa Bear: Grrr! Someone’s been sitting in my chair, it has moved.
Mama Bear: Oh no! Someone’s been sitting in my chair, the cushion has fallen off.
Baby Bear: Awwww! Someone’s been sitting in my chair, and it’s broken.
(They went upstairs to their bedroom)
Papa Bear: Grrr! Someone’s been sleeping in my bed, because the pillow is on the floor.
Mama Bear: Oh no! Someone’s been sleeping in my bed, because the blankets are out of place.
Baby Bear: Awww! Someone’s been sleeping in my bed and there she is!
(Goldilocks jumped up with worry but she stayed and told the three bears what happened)
Mama Bear: Can I please talk to you for a minute dear.
(Papa Bear nodded)
Papa Bear: What’s the matter dear?
Mama Bear: That girl seems really familiar.
Papa Bear: Really? What’s familiar about her?
Mama Bear: Her eyes and her personality.
Papa Bear: Oh
Mama Bear: Maybe we should let her stay for a few days and we will see what happens after that.
(Papa Bear agrees with Mama Bear. They both go over and tell Goldilocks the news)
Mama Bear: You can stay here for a few days if you like?
Goldilocks: Yes please, I would love that.
(Goldilocks hugs Mama Bear)
Few days have passed…
Goldilocks: Thank you for letting me stay with you.
Mama Bear: That’s ok dear, but how did you get here?
Goldilocks: I know this might sound crazy but I was originally a bear, I got lost a few years ago trying to find my family. I was running away from this dreadful witch called Trixie. They captured me and turned me into a human.
Mama Bear: That’s why she looked familiar. You see we lost our daughter a few years ago and we thought that she passed away without us knowing, so I think it’s you.
Baby Bear: Are you my sister?
Goldilocks: I don’t know
Papa Bear: Who is this Trixie witch?
Goldilocks: She is mean and awful. She transforms animals into humans and if they don’t find their families in 7 days they will be human forever.
Baby Bear: How about we go get this witch?
(Baby Bear asking the question to the other three)
Mama Bear: Are you sure dear?
Baby Bear: Yes I’m sure
(Goldilocks and Papa bear agree with Mama and Baby bear)
Papa Bear: We will leave tomorrow at 9am sharp, so start packing.
(They all agree with Papa bear and start packing but Goldilocks doesn’t know what to pack because she didn’t bring any spare clothes)
The next morning…
Papa Bear: Everyone ready.
Mama, Baby Bear & Goldilocks: Yep!
2 hours later…
Baby Bear: Finally!
Goldilocks: We have to be very quiet though.Queen Trixie: Fancy seeing you here. I see you brought some friends along with you. Well sadly they’re mine. GUARDS! Take these bears and put them in a cage.
Papa Bear: ROAR!
(Papa bear got angry, but all of them got captured except for Goldilocks)
(Unfortunately Goldilocks was a clever and wise girl who knew exactly what to do. Before baby bear got captured she whispered something in his ear)
Goldilocks: Don’t tell anyone but I’m going to fill this bag with dirt and throw it on the ground and cause a distraction.
(Baby bear agrees with Goldilocks)
BOOM!
(Goldilocks makes a distraction and runs inside of the castle)
Goldilocks: Where are they?
Queen Trixie: Up there.
(Queen Trixie points to the three sad bears.)
Goldilocks: What does your sceptre do?
Queen Trixie: Turns animals into humans and humans into animals.
Goldilocks: Oh.
(Goldilocks had a trick up her sleeve)
(Queen Trixie turns around for a second and Goldilocks takes the scepter.)
Goldilocks: Aha got you now Trixie.
(Goldilocks turns Queen Trixie into a helpless little mouse)
Queen Trixie: Noooooo!
(Goldilocks unlocks the cage and she turns back into a bear)
Goldilocks: I’ve turned back into a bear again. (gasps) That means that you are my family.
Mama, Baby and Papa bear: Yay!
They lived happily ever after.
The End.
Have you ever made a play before?
What was your favourite part in the play?